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Ma brother

[日期:2015-12-17] 来源: 网友上传 作者:曹建国
标签: brother Ma

    I have a younger brother. With bright piercing eyes, mouth underneath, his eye has a small as cherry mouth , breaks into laugh having a pair of small dimple.I love ma younger brother.

名师点评:
A bright piercing eyes,a cherry mouth and a pair of small dimples.I think your brother is very lovely,isn't it?I am very happy that you can write something about your brother in English.Not bad!And in your composition,you can use some sentence patterns.Such as:as small as,a pair of.Very good! 老师非常开心雅妮能用英语描写弟弟:一双敏锐明亮的眼睛,一张樱桃小嘴再加上脸上的一对小酒窝。多么天真活泼,可爱的弟弟呀! 在文章中小作者很巧妙地运用到了:as...as,a pair of的句型,这使文章大生光彩。在今后的学习生活中,只要多加练习写英语作文,老师相信你定能取得更加优异的成绩。Come on!

    (快乐学堂特聘教师:余老师) 2009-5-14 11:50:40

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